Forever Yours - Part One  (#1) - Deila Longford I was hoping to enjoy this story, especially considering the main character and I share a first name. Unfortunately, I didn't enjoy this book very much.

The story was alright, but it simply seems like a cheap spin-off of the Twilight series. The plot is predictable and a bit melodramatic. I was disappointed with the lack of originality (Portland, Maine, really??) and now slightly offended that the character has my name...

My main issue with it, is it doesn't seem like it was spell-checked, grammar checked, or edited. The whole book needs serious editing, and there are so many simple mistakes, it's just irritating.

I did finish it though, and want to continue reading the series (it has to get better right?), so I think it balances out to 2 stars.

~Read my reviews of the rest of the series:
Forever Yours Part 2
Forever Yours Part 3
Forever Yours Part 4